Wednesday, 12 March 2014

Sensory Garden Recount

Reflection on my Recount -

  • Underline where you think you are in your learning of the sensory recount.
  • Remember you are just assessing how well you described your surroundings, using descriptive words or poetic devices.


Extended Abstract
I can help someone else to suggest ways to improve their own sensory recount.

Relational
I can add a poetic device to make it more interesting e.g simile, metaphor or alliteration.

Multistructural
I can describe using more than 2 senses in my recount.

Unistructural
I can describe using at least 2 of my senses in my recount.

Pre-structural
I need help to find words to describe what I see, feel, touch, or hear.


I have put myself at Relational because I used more than three senses included in my recount.          

My next learning step is to work on my thinking by thinking of new similes and metaphors for my writing to make it sound better.

1 comment:

Kate said...

Hi Macu
I will come back often and follow your progress.
Nana Kate